Friday, February 22, 2013

Hide and Seek by Loni

James is at the back of the  tree which is thick, grey and rough. James can see kids playing
cars and cat,birds.

While standing beside the tree, he hears the motorbikes zooming past and a noisy dog barking. He can also hear laughter from the kids. 

James is hiding from his brother and they are playing hide go seek. James feels nervous as he waits for his brother.

James feels nervous about getting caught. He can taste the damp tree. He is watiting for his brother to find him.

This is my description I wrote this week during writing time.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

good work Loni I like it