Wednesday, February 20, 2013

My Brother - By Mavis

                         This is a metaphor poem about my big brother.I chose my brother because he is one of those people who are awesome in their own way


Ms Hansell said...

Hello Mavis, I loved reading your Metaphor Poem. I also loved how you used your brother because 'he is awesome in his own way.' Your work is always so original - please write a book one day! I would love to be able to read some of your publications in my old age.!

Anonymous said...

Excellent Mavis,I am amazed about your Metaphor Poem and I also think your brother is awesome in his way and your work is neat keep up the good work.