Thursday, August 20, 2009

Kites - A Cinquain by Jonive

Colourful shapes
Turning, twisting, tumbling
Free to fly high


RKELLY said...

Well done , Jonive. A wonderful cinquain with great describing words I can almost see the kites in the sky when I read it!!
From Mrs Kelly

Room 13 Yendarra School Tuis! said...

I love your kite poem, Jonive.

Flying kites looked like so much fun and I really like the way you have described them using great words.

Miss Hughes and Room 13,
Yendarra School

Anonymous said...

well done at least you have shown ppl what not to do thats is to make false calls congratulations

Anonymous said...

congratulations on being very sensible