William, I really enjoyed your story. The language you have used is very descriptive. You read your story well - it isn't easy reading for the camera! I am looking forward to some more great work from you. Mrs. Kelly
What a wonderful piece of writing William. Your description was so powerful I really felt like I was there and I felt sad too when you had to leave. I used to have a guava tree in the orchard behind the house I grew up in too. Keep up the great writing because you are good at it :) Mrs Burt http://tamaki.net.nz/index.php?mid=2&rid=2026
William I really like your story and the effort that you put into it. Know George and some of your family I cant imagine that some of your sisters weren't up that tree as well. Keep practising the Rugby, perhaps you'll be great at Rugby like your Brothers and one day play for Tamaki Intermediate or maybe the mighty Waikato! Mr Webb Tamaki Intermediate School
William I really like your story and the effort that you put into it. Know George and some of your family I cant imagine that some of your sisters weren't up that tree as well. Keep practising the Rugby, perhaps you'll be great at Rugby like your Brothers and one day play for Tamaki Intermediate or maybe the mighty Waikato! Mr Webb Tamaki Intermediate School
William I really like your story and the effort that you put into it. Know George and some of your family I cant imagine that some of your sisters weren't up that tree as well. Keep practising the Rugby, perhaps you'll be great at Rugby like your Brothers and one day play for Tamaki Intermediate or maybe the mighty Waikato! Mr Webb Tamaki Intermediate School
William I really like your story and the effort that you put into it. Know George and some of your family I cant imagine that some of your sisters weren't up that tree as well. Keep practising the Rugby, perhaps you'll be great at Rugby like your Brothers and one day play for Tamaki Intermediate or maybe the mighty Waikato! Mr Webb Tamaki Intermediate School
William I really like your story and the effort that you put into it. Know George and some of your family I cant imagine that some of your sisters weren't up that tree as well. Keep practising the Rugby, perhaps you'll be great at Rugby like your Brothers and one day play for Tamaki Intermediate or maybe the mighty Waikato! Mr Webb Tamaki Intermediate School
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William, I really enjoyed your story. The language you have used is very descriptive.
You read your story well - it isn't easy reading for the camera!
I am looking forward to some more great work from you.
Mrs. Kelly
What a wonderful piece of writing William. Your description was so powerful I really felt like I was there and I felt sad too when you had to leave. I used to have a guava tree in the orchard behind the house I grew up in too.
Keep up the great writing because you are good at it :)
Mrs Burt
http://tamaki.net.nz/index.php?mid=2&rid=2026
William I really like your story and the effort that you put into it. Know George and some of your family I cant imagine that some of your sisters weren't up that tree as well. Keep practising the Rugby, perhaps you'll be great at Rugby like your Brothers and one day play for Tamaki Intermediate or maybe the mighty Waikato!
Mr Webb
Tamaki Intermediate School
William I really like your story and the effort that you put into it. Know George and some of your family I cant imagine that some of your sisters weren't up that tree as well. Keep practising the Rugby, perhaps you'll be great at Rugby like your Brothers and one day play for Tamaki Intermediate or maybe the mighty Waikato!
Mr Webb
Tamaki Intermediate School
William I really like your story and the effort that you put into it. Know George and some of your family I cant imagine that some of your sisters weren't up that tree as well. Keep practising the Rugby, perhaps you'll be great at Rugby like your Brothers and one day play for Tamaki Intermediate or maybe the mighty Waikato!
Mr Webb
Tamaki Intermediate School
William I really like your story and the effort that you put into it. Know George and some of your family I cant imagine that some of your sisters weren't up that tree as well. Keep practising the Rugby, perhaps you'll be great at Rugby like your Brothers and one day play for Tamaki Intermediate or maybe the mighty Waikato!
Mr Webb
Tamaki Intermediate School
William I really like your story and the effort that you put into it. Know George and some of your family I cant imagine that some of your sisters weren't up that tree as well. Keep practising the Rugby, perhaps you'll be great at Rugby like your Brothers and one day play for Tamaki Intermediate or maybe the mighty Waikato!
Mr Webb
Tamaki Intermediate School
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