Thursday, May 17, 2012

Tom, Jerry and Mickey Mouse

This is my narrative story. I had to write a story for homework based on a picture of a cat, mouse and Mickey mouse. Here is my story:

One day mickey mouse was walking through the forest and came across Tom the cat and Jerry the mouse.Mickey saw that Tom and Jerry were fighting so mickey went to help.

“ Why are you guys fighting” asked mickey mouse “I want the cheese said Tom, I want
the Cheese! said Jerry.

Mickey Took the Cheese and cut the cheese in half and said now you guys can share. They thanked mickey and everyone was happy.

7 comments:

austin said...

I like your thinking and solving out halves and how they became happy that they had the same amount of cheese.Then they didn't fight for the cheese any more because they cut the cheese in half and they would be happy.

Sharon said...

WOW! room7 your writing was very exciting to read i have learn that fighting is a bad thing but helping is good thing.What i liked is that Tom wanted the cheese but he never got it since mickey mouse decided to cut the cheese into pieces so it could be even!I love your story keep up the excellent work room7!

Your sincerely:Sharon Sampson

Unknown said...

I love it when Tom and Jerry was fighting between the cheese that was so hilariousness LOL!!!

Naulivou said...

wow!Room 7 kids know a Lot about Micky mouse and tom and jerry. My favorite bit is when they are fighting about the cheese it was pro bely nice that why they were fighting over it.Your comment was inter vesting.

Mrs Fepuleai said...

I always knew Mickey was a helpful mouse! Tom and Jerry are very funny aren't they...it's my favourite cartoon! Could make your story into a cartoon?
Keep up the great work!:-)

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