Sunday, October 10, 2010

My Day Making Butter.

One hot day I was churning the butter, I felt exhausted and I wanted to go swimming with my friends. But my mum said "no". I still had to churn the butter my arms are aching, my hand is sweating drip by drip and it’s a really, really hot day. My forehead was sweating and the butter was getting thick, smooth and creamy. It is getting thick and hard, I looked inside the churn it was finished. I asked my mum if I could go swimming, she said “yes” and I was allowed to swim.

By Jazmine.

1 comment:

Miss Hansell (Room 8) said...

Wow Jazmine, I loved the way you described your hand as sweating drip by drip. I can imagine the heat and how hard your character was working.

Well done :)

Miss Hansell (Room 8)