Well done , Jonive. A wonderful cinquain with great describing words I can almost see the kites in the sky when I read it!!From Mrs Kelly
I love your kite poem, Jonive.Flying kites looked like so much fun and I really like the way you have described them using great words.Miss Hughes and Room 13, Yendarra School
well done at least you have shown ppl what not to do thats is to make false calls congratulations
congratulations on being very sensible
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Well done , Jonive. A wonderful cinquain with great describing words I can almost see the kites in the sky when I read it!!
From Mrs Kelly
I love your kite poem, Jonive.
Flying kites looked like so much fun and I really like the way you have described them using great words.
Miss Hughes and Room 13,
Yendarra School
well done at least you have shown ppl what not to do thats is to make false calls congratulations
congratulations on being very sensible
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