tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1849654171533196619.post6904566864651542823..comments2023-11-03T00:02:11.636+13:00Comments on Room 7: Dreaming of a Beautiful PlaceRKELLYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06050799137057826392noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1849654171533196619.post-7613409841024743472012-03-26T12:12:51.007+13:002012-03-26T12:12:51.007+13:00Hi Maopa,
Your Mum and I were really impressed wi...Hi Maopa,<br /><br />Your Mum and I were really impressed with your long story. Well done!<br /><br />We especially loved your descriptions of the beach and the smells it created.<br /><br />From your Mum and Miss Brown (Manaiakalani Trust)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1849654171533196619.post-34837295990697579242011-11-23T13:51:44.843+13:002011-11-23T13:51:44.843+13:00I like the way you felt and how you put your story...I like the way you felt and how you put your story into paragraphs.Marcusnoreply@blogger.com